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can still be understood initially but over time makes me confused because the discussion is not focused. the language used is also strange to understand.

Painful thing was when we were encouraged to improve things but the sudden loss of one of our most dear and very affecting in our lives, that is my father. My father was a tough guy, patient, wise, and compassionate.

He was not gone for a while but gone forever, gone when we all need it. two months my sister's wedding ceremony will be held where the father should be the guardian of my sister. my father was able to see my sister's wedding but with different circumstances that the dead body.

plan does god no one knows. we only can run but can not stop the will of god.